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Wednesday, June 28, 2017

FF: Will he call?

PC: Rochelle Wisoff Fields
She stood here alone reminiscing the previous night. Her fingers went up to her slightly bruised lips, those lips curved into a sly smile.

She could still feel, him holding her hand on this path, her first and the only man whom she has been crushing on for 20 years now and suddenly, he pushed her up that wall, and started to kiss her passionately. It was just as she had read in her teenage Mills & Boon novel.

This morning, he said he will call her. She was hoping more rendezvous like last night.


Question is, Will he really call?

This post is written for Friday Ficitoneers

48 comments:

  1. I hope he does.🙂 Nice story , Dee Dee

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    1. I hope that too :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Moon

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  2. Looks like the alley has an even earlier history than I knew about. If you read my story you will understand why

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    1. I am sure it might have a wonderful history to it.
      Thanks for dropping by Mike :-)

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  3. I'll pop back tomorrow to see if called! A delightful chunk of chic-lit!

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    1. I really hope he does :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Keith :-)

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  4. Great visual! Can so see the lovers intertwined! <3

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  5. And the answer is, He'd probably got all his lines perfected by now. Of course he'll call her---and all the others.
    Oh cynical me! 😐 Christine

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    1. I know right...so typical

      Thanks for dropping by Christine :-)

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  6. The cynic in me says he won't call!

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    1. Me too..but I do hope that he does..for her sake
      Thanks for dropping by Iain :-)

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  7. He will call back for sure and the call will be echoed by the walls of the alley... just to make sure that walls need more juicy stories than the previous night!
    Loved the short and sassy story!
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    Anagha From Team MocktailMommies
    Rewind

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    1. I am sure the wall does have many stories :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Anagha :-)

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  8. I think you need to go into writing Mills & Boon - great, passionate little story! Question: Because you have 'suddenly' in one of the sentences, I think it needs to finish off with something? That sentence feels unfinished to me

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    1. Thanks for pointing that out, I have made the changes, I had something else in mind when I writing that :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Rebecca :-)

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  9. I was about to comment "will he really call" when I saw the last line! Fingers crossed...

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    1. Big question?I do hope that he calls :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Alistair :-)

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  10. Why DeeDee,I'm blushing! I sure hope the guy calls her back - she deserves to still her quivering heart! Goodness gracious, I need a fan and a drink! Nan

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    1. I so wish he calls her, for carnal desires if not for love :P
      Thanks for commenting Nan :-)

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  11. Dear DeeDee, I'm hyperventilating now. Racy and good! I like it! Nan

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  12. I do hope he calls...but, the bitter truth to be considered here is, they don't always call, do they?
    It did feel like the M & B romances, DeeDee! :)

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    1. I don't think he will call.
      Typical case, huh. But, I really hope he does.For her sake.
      Thanks for dropping by Shilpa :-)

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  13. Great little teaser story leaving us wanting more. Hope he calls!

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    1. I really hope that he does call.For, her sake
      Thanks for dropping by Cathy :-)

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  14. Let's hope it comes good for her, the signs are not promising

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    1. I agree, I don't think he will call, but I hope he does though
      Thanks for dropping by Michael :-)

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  15. Let's hope it comes good for her, the signs are not promising

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  16. I doubt he'll call, but I've been wrong before, so maybe he will.

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    1. You might be right this time Adam.
      I do hope that he calls though :-)

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  17. Life rarely works out like a romance novel, though for her sake, I hope it does.

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    1. I totally agree with you James :-)
      Fingers crossed for her

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  18. Let's hope he calls, but I'm afraid I'm a cynic if it's taken him 20 years to get to her.

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    1. Sascha, I think he might take even longer.
      Sigh
      Thanks for dropping by :-)

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  19. A sweet little romantic story bringing a smile. definitely he will call her, I think.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/06/the-archways.html

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    1. Wow, I love your optimism.
      I do hope he calls :-)

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  20. I think he'll call. She's had a crush on him for twenty years, and he's only just noticed. That suggests a certain naivety; so I think he was telling the truth!

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    1. I hope he doesn't use her crush and never calls back.
      Thanks for dropping by Penny :-)

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  21. A dark alley, of course, why didn't I think of this!

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    1. There is always a next time Kelvin :-)
      Thanks for dropping by

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