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Tuesday, July 25, 2017

FFAW: Drunk Pirate

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I was looking for him all over the house, but he was nowhere to be found. I hate that he goes AWOL on me whenever we are out holidaying.

I yell at my son “Omi, where is your father?”
“I saw him drinking beer by the beach an hour back,” Omi yelled back, still stuck to his cellphone.

I was muttering curses under my breath and what I see from my window?

My husband is standing on a stationery boat and screaming “Aargh! Aargh! I am Jack Sparrow”


That is it, all the alcohol is my house is going in the drains tonight

This post is written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers

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32 comments:

  1. moonJuly 25, 2017 at 5:24 PM

    Such a fun story, DeeDee! :)

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  2. Iain KellyJuly 25, 2017 at 6:34 PM

    Haha, I like his escapism, even if he needs to lay off the alcohol a bit! :-)

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    1. DeepaJuly 26, 2017 at 9:41 AM

      I am sure his wife will make sure that he is away from that alcohol :P
      Thanks for dropping by Iain :-)

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  3. Nick WilfordJuly 25, 2017 at 6:39 PM

    Hmm, definitely time for an intervention!

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  4. Priceless JoyJuly 25, 2017 at 8:21 PM

    Hahahaha! I don't blame her for dumping all the alcohol down the drain! Her husband has gone alcohol crazy! Cute story!

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    1. DeepaJuly 26, 2017 at 9:42 AM

      I agree, sometimes the wife has to take things in her hands. :P
      Thanks for dropping by Priceless Joy

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  5. NadiaJuly 26, 2017 at 3:34 AM

    Haha! Good one!!

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  6. Su-sieee! MacJuly 26, 2017 at 5:02 AM

    Great use of dialog to push your story forward. Love it.

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  7. MarjaJuly 26, 2017 at 11:40 AM

    haha who doesn't want to be Jack Sparrow

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    1. DeepaJuly 27, 2017 at 11:55 AM

      I agree...atleast pretend to be one :P
      Thanks for dropping by Marja :-)

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  8. Keith's RamblingsJuly 26, 2017 at 4:14 PM

    This is brilliant! Thanks for the chuckle.

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  9. kalpana solsiJuly 26, 2017 at 7:23 PM

    Jack Sparrow.. I like it. and his wife is right in dumping all the alcohol down the drain. What drama!!

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/07/the-dual-life.html

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    1. DeepaJuly 27, 2017 at 11:56 AM

      Totally doable no?
      Thanks for dropping by Kalpana :-)

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  10. VaradharajanJuly 26, 2017 at 10:06 PM

    Jack Sparrow rules! How dare the bad lady dump his alcohol down the drain? Hahaha! This was really funny DeeDee. Cheers, Varad

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    1. DeepaJuly 27, 2017 at 11:56 AM

      All for her husband :P
      Thanks for dropping by Varad

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  11. AnonymousJuly 26, 2017 at 10:36 PM

    is the boat sinking as he walks onto the land?

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    1. DeepaJuly 27, 2017 at 11:57 AM

      I hope it doesnt :D
      Thanks for dropping by Flipflop

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  12. csknottsJuly 27, 2017 at 4:58 AM

    Funny! Great job.

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  13. GattinaJuly 27, 2017 at 12:45 PM

    I am probably the only one who only knows a picture of the captain ! Nothing else !

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    1. DeepaAugust 1, 2017 at 10:02 AM

      I guess so :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Gattina

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  14. Joy PixleyJuly 27, 2017 at 6:25 PM

    Funny take!

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  15. AnonymousJuly 31, 2017 at 5:25 PM

    He, he! She better hide the bottles from Jack Sparrow :-)

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    1. DeepaAugust 1, 2017 at 10:03 AM

      I agree :-D
      Thanks for dropping by Jacqueline

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  16. UppalAugust 3, 2017 at 6:51 AM

    Innovative style!

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Thanks for dropping in this time.

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