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Tuesday, July 25, 2017

FFAW: Drunk Pirate

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I was looking for him all over the house, but he was nowhere to be found. I hate that he goes AWOL on me whenever we are out holidaying.

I yell at my son “Omi, where is your father?”
“I saw him drinking beer by the beach an hour back,” Omi yelled back, still stuck to his cellphone.

I was muttering curses under my breath and what I see from my window?

My husband is standing on a stationery boat and screaming “Aargh! Aargh! I am Jack Sparrow”


That is it, all the alcohol is my house is going in the drains tonight

This post is written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers

32 comments:

  1. Such a fun story, DeeDee! :)

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  2. Haha, I like his escapism, even if he needs to lay off the alcohol a bit! :-)

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    1. I am sure his wife will make sure that he is away from that alcohol :P
      Thanks for dropping by Iain :-)

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  3. Hmm, definitely time for an intervention!

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    1. I agree :P
      Thanks for dropping by Nick

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  4. Hahahaha! I don't blame her for dumping all the alcohol down the drain! Her husband has gone alcohol crazy! Cute story!

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    1. I agree, sometimes the wife has to take things in her hands. :P
      Thanks for dropping by Priceless Joy

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  5. Great use of dialog to push your story forward. Love it.

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  6. haha who doesn't want to be Jack Sparrow

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    1. I agree...atleast pretend to be one :P
      Thanks for dropping by Marja :-)

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  7. This is brilliant! Thanks for the chuckle.

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  8. Jack Sparrow.. I like it. and his wife is right in dumping all the alcohol down the drain. What drama!!

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/07/the-dual-life.html

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    1. Totally doable no?
      Thanks for dropping by Kalpana :-)

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  9. Jack Sparrow rules! How dare the bad lady dump his alcohol down the drain? Hahaha! This was really funny DeeDee. Cheers, Varad

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    1. All for her husband :P
      Thanks for dropping by Varad

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  10. is the boat sinking as he walks onto the land?

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    1. I hope it doesnt :D
      Thanks for dropping by Flipflop

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  11. I am probably the only one who only knows a picture of the captain ! Nothing else !

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    1. I guess so :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Gattina

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  12. He, he! She better hide the bottles from Jack Sparrow :-)

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    1. I agree :-D
      Thanks for dropping by Jacqueline

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