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| PC: Sandra Crook |
Lana stood in front of this building and thought to herself “In
a week, this place would have been laden with white and pink flowers. All the
loved ones would smile for a picture here.”
Lana almost saw an image of herself in her lilac wedding gown
and Stuart looking dapper in his tuxedo.
Then she looked at the letter in her hand and the building
in front started to blur in her tears and her tears turned into heart-breaking
sobs as she crushed the letter
The letter said just one line “Stuart died in a car crash
this morning”
This post is written for Friday Fictioneers
Dear Dee Dee,
ReplyDeleteHeartbreaking. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle :-)
DeleteYes, very heartbreaking indeed. Well written, Dee Dee.
ReplyDeleteI agree Neel.
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Hi DeeDee - it must happen ... so desperately sad - evocatively told - cleverly done - cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteThank you Hilary :-)
DeleteOH! How sad. Well-written.
ReplyDeleteA sad tale, nicely rendered.
ReplyDeleteThank you Iain :-)
DeleteI expected a sad ending, but not that one.
ReplyDeleteMy FF story, Ma Fantaisie Francais!
Its hard to lose people
DeleteThanks for dropping by Keith :-)
Wow. There were a number of elements in your story similar to my own, but the outcome is radically different.
ReplyDeleteAwesome minds think alike :-)
DeleteOh what a disaster...
ReplyDeleteIt is. Thanks for dropping by Brudberg :-)
DeleteThis is so sad. Nice mis-direct too. I thought she had been dumped!
ReplyDeleteIt is sad Clare.
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Very sad! But nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sascha :-)
DeleteComplete story well told. A funeral instead of a wedding.
ReplyDeleteOne thought: I've been listening to a writing tutor who says you don't need to think "to yourself" because who else would you think to.
Talking to yourself is sometimes really important, you do need expert advise sometime right :D
DeleteThanks for dropping by SITW
YIKES ... I didn't expect that ending. Sad ... a wonderful unfolding description. Well done ...
ReplyDeleteIsadora 😎
Thank you Isadora :-)
DeleteSimple, sweet and sorrowful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Sabina :-)
DeleteHeartbreaking story. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Amie :-)
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