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| PC: Ted Strutz |
He was nervous.She was biting her lips. They both were
silent for a long time. Both had so much to day but words failed them.
He took her for sailing in his favorite boat,the boat that
he named after her.
The moon shone beautifully in the sky, he gathered his guts,
put his hand in his pocket nad pulled out the most beautiful antique cut ring.
While the boat and the waters were lit with the moonlight,
he went on his knees and asked her “Will you marry me?”
This post is written for Friday Fictioneers
She can't say 'no' after a proposal like that, can she?
ReplyDeleteI hope she doesnt :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Iain :-)
Nice and positive. Good read.
ReplyDeleteAw. Sweet story, Dee Dee.
ReplyDeleteShalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle :-)
DeleteAww. What a romantic setting for a proposal :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Linda :-)
DeleteThis is the third story based on the prompt to mention proposing marriage. What is it about moonlight, anyway? :D
ReplyDeleteMoonlight is romantic......sometimes
DeleteThanks for dropping by james :-)
She better say yes. He owns a boat for heavens sakes!
ReplyDeleteQuite a valid point to consider :-)
DeleteThanks for Varad
Sweet
ReplyDeleteThank you Dale :-)
DeleteI think this is a moment when yes is the best answer.... but who knows.
ReplyDeleteWho knows...lets hope for the best though :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Brudberg
Lovely, DeeDee, very lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you Moon :-)
Deleteand what a romantic cruise. Hope they will always remain true to each other.
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I hope that too :-)
DeleteAwww..... so sweet. I hope she says Yes.
ReplyDeleteI do hope that too :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Justjoyfulness
Will she, won't she? A beutifully romantic scene.
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I hope she does :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Keith
Aw, so romantic and neat photo ~ ^_^
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Thank you Carol :-)
DeleteSweet story. But he's already named a boat after her. Is he optimistic or obsessed?
ReplyDeleteI hope he is the optimistic one, coz he hasn't shown his obsessive side yet
DeleteWhat a lovely way to propose! These days I see all these fancy production proposals online, but all you really need to be romantic is an open heart. Although a full moon over the water doesn't hurt!
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Joy :-)
DeleteI bet she says yes! Very romantic :-)
ReplyDeleteI do hope that :-)
DeleteSo romantic!
ReplyDeleteThank you Alice :-)
Deletei could feel the intensity of the moment the way you wrote it. well done.
ReplyDeletethat said, it looks like there's a couple of typos. you can find them in the fourth and sixth sentences.