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| PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot |
For centuries it sat there. It has seen wars, births and
cities growing around it
It has seen kids,
become beautiful men & women
It has seen murders & lovers
It has seen sun, storm chilly winters & rain
Abandoned & alone, with million stories in it
In darkness, lies enlightenment
For the one, who is willing to show it some care it deserves
This post is written for Friday Ficitoneers by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Dear Dee,
ReplyDeleteTime rushes on.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Yes it does Rochelle
DeleteThanks for dropping by
Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra :-)
DeleteJust waiting for someone to open it up and discover its stories.
ReplyDeleteI didn't get the storm child part...
oops, a spelling error, thanks. I meant chilled winters
DeleteThanks for dropping by Dale ;-)
i like this piece so much i'd like to make a simple change if you don't mind. instead of "it" why not use "i" since the title is "i too need care" anyway? i think it'll put more punch to the story.
ReplyDeleteAhh..well..a good thought
DeleteI thought I would give it an edge.
Thanks for dropping by :-)