.status-msg-wrap { display: none; } div#ContactForm1 { display: none !important; }

Friday, December 4, 2015

FF: I too need care

PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
For centuries it sat there. It has seen wars, births and cities growing around it

It has seen kids,  become beautiful men & women
It has seen murders & lovers

It has seen sun, storm chilly winters & rain

Abandoned & alone, with million stories in it
In darkness, lies enlightenment

For the one, who is willing to show it some care it deserves


8 comments:

  1. Dear Dee,

    Time rushes on.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    ReplyDelete
  2. Just waiting for someone to open it up and discover its stories.
    I didn't get the storm child part...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. oops, a spelling error, thanks. I meant chilled winters
      Thanks for dropping by Dale ;-)

      Delete
  3. i like this piece so much i'd like to make a simple change if you don't mind. instead of "it" why not use "i" since the title is "i too need care" anyway? i think it'll put more punch to the story.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Ahh..well..a good thought
      I thought I would give it an edge.

      Thanks for dropping by :-)

      Delete

Hey, Your comments would encourage me to write more.
Thanks for dropping in this time.