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Thursday, April 7, 2016

FF: I Lay Here Alone

Jhardy
PC: J Hardy Carroll
I lay here alone, watching and waiting for the man who killed me.

Every day I wait at this window in this abandoned building.
Every night I leave and walk around this building with a candle in my hand to search for him, the only sound is my anklet’s ting and my crying.

I am not visible on mirrors anymore. No one can see me, but they can hear me.

People come for researches here.
What I see on their faces is fear

They write stories on this building. This place is now featured in the “Most Haunted Buildings”

This post is written for Friday Ficitoneers

15 comments:

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    1. It sure should be :P
      Thanks for dropping by Olden times :)

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  2. Lovely flash! Good job, I haven't participated in FF for far too long!

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    1. Please start participating again. I would love to read your fiction :)

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  3. Dear Dee Dee,

    Spooky and interesting PoV.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  4. Not the best way to achieve celebrity-dom, I can tell. Good, creepy and has a character I'd like to know more about. Fun. :)

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    1. Trust me wmqcolby, I would like to know the past present of this spook.
      Someday I will write about it

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  5. Noorie song in the background.. and it would be perfect

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    1. Wasnt Bally Sagoo's Noorie about her truck driver boyfriend?
      Nice observation. Thanks for dropping by Art

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    1. :D indeed. Thanks for dropping by Melanie :)

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  7. Love the p.o.v. it adds to the scare factor. Hope the murderer gets what's coming to him

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    1. :)

      Thanks for the comment descentintoreality

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  8. Brilliant piece, well written and incredibly moving
    Debbie

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Hey, Your comments would encourage me to write more.
Thanks for dropping in this time