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Every day I wait at this
window in this abandoned building.
Every night I leave and walk around
this building with a candle in my hand to search for him, the only sound is my
anklet’s ting and my crying.
I am not visible on mirrors
anymore. No one can see me, but they can hear me.
People come for researches
here.
What I see on their faces is
fear
They write stories on this
building. This place is now featured in the “Most Haunted Buildings”
This post is written for Friday Ficitoneers
and it should be!
ReplyDeleteIt sure should be :P
DeleteThanks for dropping by Olden times :)
Lovely flash! Good job, I haven't participated in FF for far too long!
ReplyDeletePlease start participating again. I would love to read your fiction :)
DeleteDear Dee Dee,
ReplyDeleteSpooky and interesting PoV.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle :)
DeleteNot the best way to achieve celebrity-dom, I can tell. Good, creepy and has a character I'd like to know more about. Fun. :)
ReplyDeleteTrust me wmqcolby, I would like to know the past present of this spook.
DeleteSomeday I will write about it
Noorie song in the background.. and it would be perfect
ReplyDeleteWasnt Bally Sagoo's Noorie about her truck driver boyfriend?
DeleteNice observation. Thanks for dropping by Art
Spooky...
ReplyDeleteMelanie Schulz from
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:D indeed. Thanks for dropping by Melanie :)
DeleteLove the p.o.v. it adds to the scare factor. Hope the murderer gets what's coming to him
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteThanks for the comment descentintoreality
Brilliant piece, well written and incredibly moving
ReplyDeleteDebbie