 |
| PC |
My ex showed me how beautiful life can be.
My ex also made me feel the pain of seeing him with someone else.
My ex showed me that love can make me stay up all night,crying softly or weeping my heart out into my pillow and made me question myself why me?
My ex ripped my heart apart and broke it into a million pieces and made me wonder of how much more pain can I endure
Then, my current boyfriend and would-be husband came by, with a bucket load of smiles, love and lot of bandages, to mend my ripped apart, bruised and broken heart, making me realize how "True Love" feels like
This post is written for Six Sentence Story - Ripped
Hi Mrs DAsh ... lovely poem - so so true ... cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteThank you Hilary :-)
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Irene :-)
DeleteBucket load of smiles-love that
ReplyDelete:-) Thank u UP
DeleteThere is light at the end of every tunnel, well, most. Delightful DeeDee
ReplyDeleteClick to read my Six!
Thank you keith :-)
DeleteI know the tale you have written so well, and despite the pain of having our hearts ripped out in betrayal, we appreciate the true love relationship that follows all the more for having known despair. It took me fifty years to finally meet my soulmate, and I can most certainly say that God saved the very best for last!
ReplyDeleteThank you Josie :-)
DeleteSometimes you kiss several toads before you find the frog prince.
ReplyDeleteI Agree MiMi
DeleteThanks for dropping by :-)
very enjoyable Six!
ReplyDeleteThank you Clark :-)
DeleteYou are so very on point. You've managed to sum up a life experience many of us have had. Thanks for a well done 6!
ReplyDeleteThank you Girlie :-)
DeleteIsn't it wonderful to discover what may have felt like the end of the world, isn't? There are so many lessons learned in relationships, and unfortunately sometimes hearts get broken, but the wounded rise even stronger often with the love and understanding that comes from others.
ReplyDeleteGreat SSS.
I agree Pat B.
DeleteLove can make big differences :-)
Thanks for dropping by