This post is written for the Friday Ficitoneers after almost a year. I have butterflies in my tummy while writing.
PHOTO PROMPT © Anshu Bhojnagarwala |
While staring at the fire bonfire, Michelle could only think
of the last night she spent in Rohelio’s arms.
That cold winter night with hot
chocolate, when they sat by the fire in her backyard making promises of never
letting go. That night of an amazing love-making session and drifting off to
sleep in those strong tanned arms. She started to dream of a life with him without
any inhibitions, or responsibilities, money didn’t seem very important to him,
is what he said.
The morning was when the reality hit hard, when she found
him gone with her money, her car and her valuables, leaving her with nothing
but a burnt log of ashes from the fire they were sitting beside the previous
night.
Poor Michelle...and she wove a whole life around this one evening. I loved your title though!
ReplyDeletesome people can have that influence no?Poor her..
DeleteThanks for dropping by Anshu :-)
A story for the ages, ma'am, he is not the first man to tell a fib
ReplyDeleteYeah.. Poor Michelle
DeleteThanks for dropping by Ce :-)
It was ever thus.
ReplyDeleteWell hard truth
DeleteThanks for dropping by Sandra
Clever twist to the story. He turned out to be a con artist. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Subroto :-)
DeleteAw poor Michelle! Great write.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lisa :-)
DeleteOh, rats! I hope he falls off a cliff or something, rotten guy! You sure set us up for the twist! Good writing, and welcome back :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Linda :-)
DeleteI'm sure I commented on this, but I don't see it. Anyway, good take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteIt was awaiting approval.Thanks for dropping by Sandra :-)
DeleteReality sure must have hit her hard! She should not have trusted him so easily...
ReplyDeleteI like the title too
Poor her! Thanks for dropping by Kislaya :-)
Deleteahhh...i can add so many words after that "Of"
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by Dale