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Wednesday, December 28, 2016

FF: Note-able Love Story

PC: Shaktiki Sharma
She took a bus every evening from this secluded bus-stop. She was sad that night and wrote a “I wish I could smile” and kept it on this bus stop. The bus came and she forgot about that note.

Next evening there was another note pinned to her note “I hope that you did smile”

She smiled and wrote ‘This note did”

Next day she eagerly waited for the evening to reach the stop, and find the note “Glad I could make you smile”


And here started a “notable love story” of Anna and Ronny.

This post is written for Friday Fictioneers

38 comments:

  1. What a sweet story!!! And a lovely way to communicate in a modern chaotic world.

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  2. What a beautiful story. It really moved me.
    xx Rowena

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    1. Thank you Rowena. XOXO

      Happy New Year!

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  3. Oh! so romantic and so beautifully written.

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  4. A smile is often the beginning of something. :-)

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    1. I agree..Its a universal language...
      Thanks for dropping by Michael

      Happy New Year!

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  5. Never despise small beginnings I always say.

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    1. Yes, totally....everything bid mostly has a small beginning

      Thanks for the comment JE Lillie

      Happy New Year!

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  6. Romance before the internet age :-)

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    1. Ahh, those good ol days. Thanks for dropping by Amit :-)

      Happy New Year!

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    1. Thank you Roopz :-)

      Happy New Year!

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  8. And so a potential romance has bloomed...

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    1. Amen to that

      Thanks for dropping by Dale

      Happy New Year!

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    1. Thank you Siobhan :-)

      Happy New Year!

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  10. Amazingly lovely! Wish there were more like this around us:)
    Great concept..wonderfully executed!

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    1. Thanks a ton Amit :-)

      You never know there already might be many like these around us :-)

      Happy New Year!

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    1. Hey Keith,
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      Glad I could make you smile. Thanks for dropping by

      Happy New Year!

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    1. Thank you Ce Ayr :-)

      Happy New Year!

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    1. It so is Dawn. Thanks for dropping by

      Happy New Year!

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  14. Just the kind of sweet story we could all use–– filled with hope, concern, and tenderness. Nice job, DeeDee!

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  15. What a delightful story, DeeDee. A bit nostalgic for a simpler time :)

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    1. :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Ravyne

      Happy New Year!

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Hey, Your comments would encourage me to write more.
Thanks for dropping in this time.