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I am really nervous. I take a deep breath. I want this to
be perfect.
She isn't a very showy person. I hope this works out
She isn't a very showy person. I hope this works out
Phoooo! *deep breath*
I have blindfolded her eyes. I am taking her to this pretty set up I made in our backyard.
I really hope that she likes it.
We are ready.
I really hope that she likes it.
We are ready.
I go behind her and take off her blindfold.
She looks awed to see all that pretty set up.
I see tears welled up in her eyes when I say “Happy 60th Birthday Ma”
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Ah, what a lovely treat for her Mum! Sweet and touching tale
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DeleteDear Dee Dee,
ReplyDeleteWhat a sweet birthday gift. Lovely.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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DeleteA very nice gesture! I'm sure she was delighted.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nick :-)
DeleteI do hope his mum was happy
Awww.Sweet and thoughtful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Linda :-)
DeleteThere I thought it was for a romantic evening. Nice twist in the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ga H :-)
DeleteThis is so touching and so beautiful. Loved it, DeeDee.
ReplyDeleteThank you Moon :-)
DeleteNice surprise.
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DeleteSweet
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DeleteSweet story.
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DeleteWhat a loving way to mark a special birthday!
ReplyDeleteThank you Penny :-)
DeleteThe idea of a tent in the backyard is lovely and closer home. Ma must be thrilled on her birthday.this story brought a smile on my face.
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DeleteA delightful tale which became all the more so when I arrived at the last line!
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DeleteAwww. Nice story.
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DeleteA simple and elegant take.
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DeleteAww that was a lovely surprise - nicely done :)
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DeleteConnie would love such a treat. She's a camping fanatic and just turned sixty in April. Maybe we'll do it for her sixty-first. :) - Russell
ReplyDeleteAll the best Russell :-)
Delete/Wait. Tent camping at 60? I hope there's a cot.
ReplyDeleteI do hope that too :P
DeleteThanks for ropping by Alice :-)
what a loving gift. she'd remember it for a long time.
ReplyDeleteI do hope that she did like it
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Aw, very sweet thing to do for his mum :-)
ReplyDeleteIsn't it :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Alistair
Such a sweet story!
ReplyDeleteThank you Amie :-)
DeleteMoms get touched by anything their child does.
ReplyDeleteThis b'day surprise is especially touching.
Always...:-)
DeleteMoms are nice
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Wow! very nice.
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DeleteVery sweet
ReplyDeleteNow that's a sweet story.
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