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Wednesday, August 16, 2017

FF: That doll

PC: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
I brought a pretty looking doll in a garage sale held in another town. We came home and I placed the new doll, Carrie with all my other doll collection.

I noticed something eerie about that doll, I dismissed that thought and slept.

That night, just after 2pm, the door to the shower opened, and I saw the shadow of a little girl.

She looked straight into my eyes and said “My name is Annabelle, never call me Carrie ever again”


I am giving away this doll for free, please text me if anyone would take it.

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48 comments:

  1. Reena SaxenaAugust 16, 2017 at 3:04 PM

    Call her Annabelle, and get to know her secret life :)

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:17 AM

      Scary Much. No thank you Mademoiselle
      Thanks for dropping by Reena :P

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  2. EshaAugust 16, 2017 at 3:27 PM

    Very very eerie indeed! I'd like to know more about her past.

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  3. moonAugust 16, 2017 at 3:27 PM

    what an amazing story ! I wouldn't risk taking it (for now, at least ):)

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:17 AM

      I wouldnt too :P
      Thanks for dropping by Moon :-)

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  4. AnonymousAugust 16, 2017 at 3:40 PM

    Gosh! That would be scary. I would throw it away instead. Gripping tale, Mrs.Dash!

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:18 AM

      What if it comes back :P
      Thanks for dropping by Justjoyfullness :)

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  5. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsAugust 16, 2017 at 5:04 PM

    Dear Dee Dee,

    I'd be finding that doll another home no matter what her name. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:18 AM

      I would either run out of my house or give her away :P
      Thanks for dropping by Rochelle

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  6. Keith's RamblingsAugust 16, 2017 at 5:27 PM

    Very kind of you, but no thanks! Nice one DeeDee

    Click to read my FriFic

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:19 AM

      Please, its a token of appreciation :D
      Thanks for dropping by Keith :-)

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  7. Iain KellyAugust 16, 2017 at 6:06 PM

    No thanks, you can keep her!!

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:19 AM

      I love your blogs and as a token of appreciation would like to give you my doll :P
      Thanks for dropping by Iain :-)

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  8. NEEL ANIL PANICKERAugust 16, 2017 at 6:18 PM

    A secret waits to be unearthed. Good story.

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:20 AM

      Please feel free to unearth it Neel :)
      Thanks for dropping by :-)

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  9. AnonymousAugust 16, 2017 at 7:26 PM

    Elegantly take.

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  10. Nick WilfordAugust 16, 2017 at 7:44 PM

    After reading that, you may need to pay someone to take it... Great creepy story!

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:20 AM

      Nick, I love your blogs and would like to give my doll as a token of appreciation :P
      Thanks for dropping by :-)

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  11. Lynn LoveAugust 16, 2017 at 8:29 PM

    Wow. Creepy! I think she should get her out of the house as soon as possible - whilst making sure she's as comfortable as she can make her, just to be sure.

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:21 AM

      I agree with you Lynn, I dont want her running back to my house :-)

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  12. AnonymousAugust 16, 2017 at 11:07 PM

    Nice one! Good job.

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  13. JamesAugust 17, 2017 at 3:17 AM

    Well, no.

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:21 AM

      James, as a token of appreciation would you like to take my doll :P
      Thanks for dropping by :-)

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  14. LindaAugust 17, 2017 at 6:57 AM

    Oooh, too creepy! I'd call her GONE!

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:22 AM

      I wish that too :P
      Thanks for dropping by Linda

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  15. AnonymousAugust 17, 2017 at 12:20 PM

    Some dolls really are spooky. I bought one at an op shop today...more of a decorative Country style thing than a children's doll. I hope I won't be seeing her flying on my broomstick any time soon. She's out near the laundry.
    Well done.
    Here's a link to mine: https://beyondtheflow.wordpress.com/2017/08/17/minding-the-dog-friday-fictioneers/
    xx Rowena

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  16. Sarah CAugust 17, 2017 at 11:44 PM

    LOL! This was great! The dolls caught my eye, too. :-)

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:22 AM

      Amazing minds think alike Sarah
      Thanks for dropping by

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  17. Bernadette BraganzaAugust 18, 2017 at 10:37 PM

    Hi Mrs. Dash,

    If I were you I would dump it off at the nearest garage sale

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:23 AM

      I plan to do that for sure :P
      thanks for dropping by Bernadette :)

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  18. kalpana solsiAugust 19, 2017 at 2:32 PM

    I wouldn't give her refuge in my home and heart, Dee Dee. loved the spooky element in your story.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/08/phobia.html

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:23 AM

      I love you blog Kalpana, i would like you to have my doll as a token of appreciation :P
      Thanks for dropping by :)

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  19. DahliaAugust 19, 2017 at 9:55 PM

    Carrie is a nice name - I wonder why Annabelle doesnt like it? Nice and eerie!

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    1. DeepaAugust 21, 2017 at 10:24 AM

      I don't want to wait to know why she doesnt like it :P
      Thanks for dropping by Dahlia

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  20. Alice AudreyAugust 21, 2017 at 12:20 PM

    Um.... thanks for the offer, but I'll pass. I've never been a big fan of dolls. Especially the ones that talk. At least it wasn't Chucky.

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    1. DeepaAugust 23, 2017 at 4:56 PM

      Alice sweety, I love your writing and would love to "gift" you this doll as a token of appreciation :P
      Thanks for dropping by :-)

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  21. dralimanAugust 21, 2017 at 12:39 PM

    Ha, I was just thinking "this is going to go all Stephen King" when the name "Carrie" came up :-)

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    1. DeepaAugust 23, 2017 at 4:55 PM

      OMG I didnt think of it in that angle at all.
      Maybe next time sometime. Thanks for the idea Alistair :-)

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  22. GardenloverAugust 21, 2017 at 3:53 PM

    Sounds like her name should be Chatty Cathy. Time to put her up for adoption. - Russell

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    1. DeepaAugust 23, 2017 at 4:54 PM

      I wonder what will happen if I stab that doll
      Weird thoughts in my head
      Thanks for dropping y Russell :-)

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  23. Joy PixleyAugust 21, 2017 at 6:35 PM

    Uh-oh! No thanks, I would NOT like that doll! Spooky take.

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    1. DeepaAugust 23, 2017 at 4:54 PM

      Joy I love your blog.
      I want to "gift" you this doll as a token of appreciation :P
      Thanks for dropping by

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  24. plaridelAugust 22, 2017 at 10:30 AM

    yours is one of the best this week. well done.

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    1. DeepaAugust 23, 2017 at 4:53 PM

      OMG That is such an amazing compliment.
      Plaridel. You just made my day :-) *hugs*

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Hey, Your comments would encourage me to write more.
Thanks for dropping in this time.

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