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Little did we know this calm looking morning waters, turn monstrous
in the night. Little did we know that these waters would lure our weak-hearted
and drunks towards it and drown them.
I remember, the next morning five out of my seven closest
friends were gone, forever.
It was then, they told us about the ‘Legend of the Drowning
Waters’
The lessons we learnt, never stop in any unknown place ever,
however beautiful it might look.
This post is written for Flash Ficiton for Aspiring Writers
A mysterious slightly unnerving story "Love the legend of the downing waters"
ReplyDeleteI hope it never comes true for anyone
DeleteThanks for dropping by Marja :-)
The lure of the unknown will always override any silly thing called common sense. Nice idea
ReplyDeleteWow,nicely put, Common Sense :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Mark
Intriguing. Would like to read more about Legend of the Drowning Waters’.
ReplyDeleteI would think on it :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Yarnspinner
Yes. The lure of the unknown is at the core of life. Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Reena :-)
DeleteSounds like a good start to a horror movie. A harsh way to learn their lesson. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteA very harsh way, it should be taken as lesson for other.
DeleteThanks for dropping by Iain :-)
The most placid of water carries danger and memories, i to liked the line about 'the legend of the downing waters'
ReplyDeleteWow, I think I would ass this line to some post in future :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Mike
Every year here in Mumbai the drowning of people gone on picnic during monsoons is repeated but people flock ignoring warning signs. sad.
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I wish people realize that life is not worth taking an unknown risk, despite warnings.
DeleteThanks for dropping by Kalpana
Intriguing ! Very well told, DeeDee!
ReplyDeleteThank you Moon :-)
DeleteGood one, DeeDee. It's a good setting for a slasher movie :D
ReplyDeleteWow, sounds nice.
DeleteThanks for the comment Varad :-)
Indeed beauty can be deceptive. Beneath calm waters could be ugly waiting to happen.
ReplyDeletePerfectly put Jacqueline
DeleteThanks for dropping buy :-)