Dooms Dome they called it.
It had a mystery around it, many believed that this dome
brought doom to whoever stands right below it at12 pm in the noon when the sun
is right above.
Its history no one knows, but its myth the whole town shows
Once a fine young man challenged, he stood at 12 pm under the
dome.
In a week hr got married, to the prettiest girl in town.
Where is the doom he asked?
Married men of the town jokingly said “You are married, now
your doom starts”
This post is written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
A really fun take on the prompt. I enjoyed it alot! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you TJ Paris :)
DeleteOh no! I hope that isn't true! I hope he shows them that "Dooms Dome" is a farce. LOL! Great story!
ReplyDeleteLOL i hope that too
DeleteLets see how it goes :P
Thanks for dropping by Priceless joy
An entertaining (and sadly anti-marriage! :-) ) take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteVery well-written!
:P
DeleteThanks for dropping buy Vijaya
How funny! Hope it doesn't turn into his real doom.
ReplyDeletehahahaha Thanks for dropping by C Knotts :)
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