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Sunday, September 20, 2015

Mag: Frosted

photo by Tess Kincaid

Sometimes, I sit alone and wish
What if things were different?

I see a moist glass
I see rains outside

I draw something on the frosted glass
While deep in my thoughts, without realizing where my fingers are moving to.
What I see when I came out of my thoughts was a free & a happy girl.

Then, I wish to be like the silhouette on the glass
I wish to be free & happy

This post is written for Magpie Tales - Mag 286
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26 comments:

  1. MichaelSeptember 21, 2015 at 1:33 AM

    dont we all

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  2. SandraSeptember 21, 2015 at 2:40 AM

    I understand...well said!

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  3. IraSeptember 21, 2015 at 9:43 AM

    Yes sometimes the inanimate world helps us realise the inner feelings!

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    1. DeepaSeptember 21, 2015 at 2:37 PM

      Just like blogs
      Thanks for dropping by Ira :)

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  4. kaykualaSeptember 21, 2015 at 1:21 PM

    Dreams of a young heart wanting everything nice to happen. Very true Dee Dee!

    Hank

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    1. DeepaSeptember 21, 2015 at 2:38 PM

      Don't everyone want nice things to happen to them :-)

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  5. RatSeptember 21, 2015 at 3:28 PM

    simple and beautiful poem.
    A Rat's Nibble

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  6. BerowneSeptember 21, 2015 at 6:29 PM

    Nicely done, with a poignant touch.

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  7. brudbergSeptember 22, 2015 at 12:21 AM

    A dream is like a silhouette, carved in fog. don't we all chase those dreams?

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    1. DeepaSeptember 22, 2015 at 10:19 AM

      We all do, some get it, some chase it all their lives :-)

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  8. Keith's ramblingsSeptember 22, 2015 at 2:46 AM

    Writing on misty glass is like scribbling in the sand as the tide creeps in. In no time at al your thoughts get carried away. A delightfully whimsical piece,
    Visit Keith's Ramblings!

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    1. DeepaSeptember 22, 2015 at 10:20 AM

      I agree with you keith.

      Thanks for dropping by

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  9. KutamunSeptember 22, 2015 at 2:00 PM

    Delightfully optimistic

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  10. Tess KincaidSeptember 22, 2015 at 7:32 PM

    Lovely...

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  11. Bekkie SanchezSeptember 22, 2015 at 9:12 PM

    Uplifting and sweet Dee Dee. Enjoy your week.

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  12. 21 WitsSeptember 22, 2015 at 10:24 PM

    Ah yes, me too!

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  13. KathleenSeptember 24, 2015 at 7:15 AM

    Universally true! Love it.

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    1. DeepaSeptember 24, 2015 at 10:26 AM

      And I thought I was alone :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Kathleen

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