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Monday, October 26, 2015

MFTS: Promise

I watched the vulture looking at me hungrily as I lay on the ground bleeding and injured

It was a two hour struggle to save myself from them. My body is almost giving up, but my brain says, just one more turn and you shall live.
That menacing vulture is hovering around waiting for me to bleed to death.

No..No Mr. Ugly Bird..I am not going to be your dinner.

They pecked me, pinched me, the followed me around trying to hurt me, and eat me alive.
I ran as fast as my small legs could take me.

Someday black crows; I am going to get back to you and hurt you bad.

It’s a promise by me, The Chicken

This post is written for Monday Finish the Story - Vulture


  1. Ha, nice twist! The bird that got away :-)

    1. Ahh, thats a nice title
      Thanks for dropping by Graham :-)

  2. The poor thing being bullied. A chicken's life is not a happy one!

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    1. I agree, poor little thing, Its born to be eaten
      Thanks for dropping by Keith :-)

  3. Your last line had me smiling - lovely twist at the end.

  4. I am glad The Chicken escaped. Tough little bird.

  5. Very funny story and point of view too.

  6. That was a great twist at the end, Dee Dee. Good for the little chicken. Well done. :) --- Suzanne

  7. My first comment seems to have disappeared so here is a second one. Great twist at the end. Good for the little chicken. Well done Dee Dee. :) --- Suzanne


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