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Tuesday, August 1, 2017

FFAW: Drowning Waters

PC: TJ Paris
Last year, same day, same place, I remember all us seven friends were here. Laughing, squealing, drinking, having fun, then that night changed everything.

Little did we know this calm looking morning waters, turn monstrous in the night. Little did we know that these waters would lure our weak-hearted and drunks towards it and drown them.

I remember, the next morning five out of my seven closest friends were gone, forever.
It was then, they told us about the ‘Legend of the Drowning Waters’


The lessons we learnt, never stop in any unknown place ever, however beautiful it might look.

This post is written for Flash Ficiton for Aspiring Writers

20 comments:

  1. A mysterious slightly unnerving story "Love the legend of the downing waters"

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    1. I hope it never comes true for anyone
      Thanks for dropping by Marja :-)

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  2. The lure of the unknown will always override any silly thing called common sense. Nice idea

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    1. Wow,nicely put, Common Sense :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Mark

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  3. Intriguing. Would like to read more about Legend of the Drowning Waters’.

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    1. I would think on it :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Yarnspinner

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  4. Yes. The lure of the unknown is at the core of life. Brilliant!

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  5. Sounds like a good start to a horror movie. A harsh way to learn their lesson. Nice one.

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    1. A very harsh way, it should be taken as lesson for other.
      Thanks for dropping by Iain :-)

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  6. The most placid of water carries danger and memories, i to liked the line about 'the legend of the downing waters'

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    1. Wow, I think I would ass this line to some post in future :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Mike

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  7. Every year here in Mumbai the drowning of people gone on picnic during monsoons is repeated but people flock ignoring warning signs. sad.

    http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/08/life-boats.html

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    1. I wish people realize that life is not worth taking an unknown risk, despite warnings.
      Thanks for dropping by Kalpana

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  8. Intriguing ! Very well told, DeeDee!

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  9. Good one, DeeDee. It's a good setting for a slasher movie :D

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    1. Wow, sounds nice.
      Thanks for the comment Varad :-)

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  10. Indeed beauty can be deceptive. Beneath calm waters could be ugly waiting to happen.

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    1. Perfectly put Jacqueline
      Thanks for dropping buy :-)

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