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Roger, chestnut hair, twinkly brown eyes, dimpled with a
ready smile on his face. This 16 year old was the heartthrob of the school.
Medium built; good at sports and academics.
Roger, was the captain of the football team, and had won
several tournaments across the county.
Now, he sits in the audience area on a wheelchair, paralyzed
with only his senses active. He feels the adrenaline on the field, he hears the
boys scream, and he sees a missed goal. And he regrets that night, when he was
drinking and driving to prove that he is cool
This post is written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
Great story. Very tragic and like the way you included what his still active senses could feel, showing how much he missed and regretted.
ReplyDelete:) this might have happened to some one somewhere..poor kid
DeleteThanks for dropping by iainthekid :)
Terrible fate to suffer.
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely..but it was his doing..i was a rash driver
DeleteThanks for dropping by livehomeandaway :)
Such a sad story but with such an important message! Wonderful story! Thank you so much for participating in the FFfAW Challenge! Welcome!
ReplyDeleteThank you Priceless Joy :)
DeleteSuch is life, one feels for Roger, and his moment of thoughtlessness.
ReplyDeleteI so agree with you. His one thoughtlessness. His one bad act cost him his life.
DeleteThanks for dropping by Mike :)
So sad that his actions changed his life forever.
ReplyDeleteSometimes teenage temper and their actions cost them way too much
DeleteThanks for dropping by Sally :)