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Friday, June 19, 2015

FF: Right Here


Fate brought him there again after 30 years. Everything looks the same.

The same room, same walkway. He could hear her voice ringing in his ears. Her laughter that echoed all over this magnificent room.

This palace that he built specially for her.

Only he knows the secret, the dark secret that this palace has.

He looks up the ceiling to see this beautifully carved chandelier, and immediately steps away from it.

For, 30 years back, right beneath this floor, he killed and buried her right under this chandelier in this very room

This post was written for Friday Fictioneers at Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
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19 comments:

  1. liz youngJune 19, 2015 at 7:39 PM

    What on earth did she do to deserve such a fate? I suppose he's afraid to sell the place instead his secret is discovered.

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  2. i b aroraJune 19, 2015 at 8:05 PM

    strange he could manage to hear her laughter??

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  3. AnonymousJune 20, 2015 at 3:34 AM

    Well, this wasn't this kind of memory or reunion I had anticipated!

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  4. plaridelJune 20, 2015 at 10:27 AM

    why did he have to come back? i think i know. deep inside, he wanted to be caught.

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  5. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsJune 20, 2015 at 3:25 PM

    Dear Dee Dee

    I have to wonder why he'd return to the scene of his crime. Intriguing.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  6. DeepaJune 20, 2015 at 3:53 PM

    Dawn, Totally

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  7. DeepaJune 20, 2015 at 3:54 PM

    Lizzy, he ran off from this place, fate got him her back. too afraid to sell the place.

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  8. DeepaJune 20, 2015 at 3:55 PM

    I B arora, he had got her here to show this palace he built for her, she was happy to be with the man she loved,but he was so enraged that she confronted him about his affairs that he had to kill her, he deceived her

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  9. DeepaJune 20, 2015 at 3:56 PM

    Lorna, not all reunions are happy

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  10. DeepaJune 20, 2015 at 3:57 PM

    Plaridel, it might be karma, what goes around comes around. He had to come back ones to close the circle of life

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  11. DeepaJune 20, 2015 at 3:58 PM

    Rochelle, Why he came back was fate. It got him here back. on some pretext, he had to finish what he started

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  12. Perry BlockJune 21, 2015 at 4:03 AM

    Grisly, but maybe it was the better alternative? Nice story!

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  13. Yolanda RenéeJune 21, 2015 at 7:06 AM

    They always return to the scene of the crime, and he heard her laughter, because she was about to get her revenge! :)

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  14. DeepaJune 21, 2015 at 8:49 PM

    Thanks Perry

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  15. DeepaJune 21, 2015 at 8:54 PM

    That is a nice way to look at it Yolanda, Thanks for this side of the insight :-)

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  16. AnonymousJune 22, 2015 at 11:55 AM

    Well, he didn't play fair. If she was laughing and happy - why did he kill her and bury her there? I just don't understand men sometimes! Nan

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  17. DeepaJune 22, 2015 at 2:31 PM

    He deceived her Anonymous

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  18. P.S. JoshiJune 24, 2015 at 3:27 AM

    So the guilty party returns to the scene of the crime. I guess no one guessed. Well done, Dee Dee. :) --- Suzanne

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  19. DeepaJune 24, 2015 at 11:54 AM

    P S Joshi, yes, they return always

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