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I was lying on my bed that night, tossing and turning. All I
could think about was the article I read of the psychotic killer on the prowl
in my area.
Suddenly, I see the shadow of a bi-cycle on the wall of my
living room that is visible from my bedroom. I was startled, then I see some
shadow creeping up near the bi-cycle. It looked huge and scary.
I thought its my end today. I had to get rid of him before he gets rid of me. I got up and walk
slowly, shivering with my baseball bat. I was ready for a fight. Then I saw the
thing move and gave a huge shout.
It was a stupid mouse and the toy bi-cycle toy that gave me
a heart attack.
The post is written for Friday Fictioneers
Ohhh, that was hilarious! Had me hooked to the end. tears of laughter are falling. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteGlad that i could make you laugh
DeleteThanks for dropping by Jellico :-)
LOL, that was funny.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lore :-)
Deleteshadows are always scary! i remember once being scared of a shadow visible from my bathroom window... i thought it was a man in a black shiny raincoat wearing a Napoleon style hat.... in the morning I realised it was just a drainpipe!
ReplyDeleteI have had no many such incidents which make me feel so stupid in the morning :P
DeleteThanks for dropping by Bettina :-)
Shadows can lie... and give heart attacks, it seems. ;-)
ReplyDeletePhew! Totally
DeleteThanks for dropping by Magaly :-)
Smiled at the mouse, they certainly do give some people a nasty shock.
ReplyDeleteIt gave me one...
DeleteThanks for dropping by Mike :-)
Too funny!
ReplyDeleteThank you Rebbeca :-)
DeleteBrilliant - love the twist ending!
ReplyDeleteDebbie
Thank you Debbie :-)
DeleteHaha! I have pepper spray right at my disposal in my room. Every time I somehow think there is an intruder in my place my thought always goes to my pepper spray can! In my case it is always the cat that I like to feed...
ReplyDeleteFunny story Thanks for sharing!
Best Wishes!
Good idea actually.
DeleteI have a knife under my pillow...Guess I am a bit extra cautious
Thanks for dropping by Karnika :-)
Mice can be hazardous to your health, can't they?
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For your mental health, the mice shadows are enough..Phew
DeleteThanks for commenting Tamara :-)
Stuart Little on the prowl! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteOhhh....I never though about it that way.
DeleteThanks Goroyboy....this is cool
Wow --- loved the surprise ending! A mouse...who'd a thunk it. I was afraid you were going to have her scoring a homer on the meter reader's head.
ReplyDeleteOuch! meter readers head...that sounds so scary
DeleteThanks for dropping by Shallow in the Wind
I'm glad you survived the shock. I can feel the heart attack coming on just from reading your account!
ReplyDeletePhew! I am happy that both of us survived :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Marcy :-)
Big shadows are scary. That was funny.
ReplyDeleteI agree :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Ga H
Shadows are scary, until we find where the light comes from
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DeleteThanks for dropping by Menaka
Loved this!!
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