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Wednesday, April 5, 2017

FF: Killer Drama

PC: Jelli
I was lying on my bed that night, tossing and turning. All I could think about was the article I read of the psychotic killer on the prowl in my area.

Suddenly, I see the shadow of a bi-cycle on the wall of my living room that is visible from my bedroom. I was startled, then I see some shadow creeping up near the bi-cycle. It looked huge and scary.

I thought its my end today. I had to get rid of him before he gets rid of me. I got up and walk slowly, shivering with my baseball bat. I was ready for a fight. Then I saw the thing move and gave a huge shout.


It was a stupid mouse and the toy bi-cycle toy that gave me a heart attack.

The post is written for Friday Fictioneers

29 comments:

  1. Ohhh, that was hilarious! Had me hooked to the end. tears of laughter are falling. Loved it!

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    1. Glad that i could make you laugh
      Thanks for dropping by Jellico :-)

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  2. shadows are always scary! i remember once being scared of a shadow visible from my bathroom window... i thought it was a man in a black shiny raincoat wearing a Napoleon style hat.... in the morning I realised it was just a drainpipe!

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    1. I have had no many such incidents which make me feel so stupid in the morning :P
      Thanks for dropping by Bettina :-)

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  3. Shadows can lie... and give heart attacks, it seems. ;-)

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    1. Phew! Totally
      Thanks for dropping by Magaly :-)

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  4. Smiled at the mouse, they certainly do give some people a nasty shock.

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    1. It gave me one...
      Thanks for dropping by Mike :-)

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  5. Brilliant - love the twist ending!
    Debbie

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  6. Haha! I have pepper spray right at my disposal in my room. Every time I somehow think there is an intruder in my place my thought always goes to my pepper spray can! In my case it is always the cat that I like to feed...
    Funny story Thanks for sharing!
    Best Wishes!

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    1. Good idea actually.
      I have a knife under my pillow...Guess I am a bit extra cautious
      Thanks for dropping by Karnika :-)

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    1. For your mental health, the mice shadows are enough..Phew
      Thanks for commenting Tamara :-)

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  8. Stuart Little on the prowl! Nice job!

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    1. Ohhh....I never though about it that way.
      Thanks Goroyboy....this is cool

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  9. Wow --- loved the surprise ending! A mouse...who'd a thunk it. I was afraid you were going to have her scoring a homer on the meter reader's head.

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    1. Ouch! meter readers head...that sounds so scary
      Thanks for dropping by Shallow in the Wind

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  10. I'm glad you survived the shock. I can feel the heart attack coming on just from reading your account!

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    1. Phew! I am happy that both of us survived :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Marcy :-)

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  11. Big shadows are scary. That was funny.

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  12. Shadows are scary, until we find where the light comes from
    Launching SIM Organics This April

    *Menaka Bharathi *

    *SimpleIndianMom*

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