She believed in true love and fairy tales
She believed that one day his knight in shining armor shall come some day
She believed that one day his knight in shining armor shall come some day
She believed in her dreams
He came into her life, to burst her bubble
And now, she believes in no one
This post is written for Five Sentence Fiction - Bubble on 27th July 2015
This post is re-submitted for Theme Thursday - Bubble on 6th August 2015
This post is re-submitted for Theme Thursday - Bubble on 6th August 2015
Hey there.
ReplyDeleteI liked this very much. Reminded me a bit of "For No One" by the Beatles. I see you don't have very many followers yet, so I'm going to follow you. make sure you visit all the other FSF'ers and comment on their stuff, that will lead to more followers for you...
Rock on,
W.
Oh I haven't heard he track , will surely download and listen.
DeleteAnd thanks for following :-)
I am a new-bie in the blog world, about 6 month old.
Thanks a lot for your encouragement *hugs*
Aww, sad.
ReplyDeleteIt is sad Patricia
DeleteOoh - I like this. Short but sweet use of the five sentences, with a strong theme or message in it. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank u Uncertaintales
DeleteSad and hard hitting Dee Dee... :-)
ReplyDeleteWould love to know what you think of my attempt... Cheers :-)
Thanks Archana ;-)
DeleteReminds me many things....Lovely, love it
ReplyDeleteI hope it didnt remind of anything bad
DeleteThanks for dropping by Womanzie :-)
I think this story pretty much covers the whole packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Its smart, subtle and extremely powerful in its simplicity.
ReplyDeleteThanks Aaliya :-)
DeleteOh no, what a powerful yet sad ending. Brilliantly written, full of emotion. x
ReplyDeletethanks for dropping by lizzie :-)
DeleteSuccinct and all too often, try. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton Sheila :-)
Deletefew words told a complete story, nice
ReplyDeleteBubbles
Thanks a ton Cifar :-)
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