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Monday, July 13, 2015

Mag 278: Walk Away



I loved you from the bottom of my heart
I stood with you, even when you broke me part by part

I started walking away not because I didn't love you anymore
Neither did I walk away because our relationship has gone sore

I walked away, because I wanted to see, If you would come looking for me
What I look back and see

You were so quick to walk away
Shows that you never intended to stay

Someday, if you miss me remember what I say,
I never wanted to go, but you drove me away

This post is written for Magpie Tales, Mag 278

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23 comments:

  1. Liz Rice-SosneJuly 13, 2015 at 1:11 PM

    Awe . . . . I want to cry. This is great with the picture!

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  2. Keith's RamblingsJuly 13, 2015 at 2:43 PM

    So so sad. Picture and words in perfect harmony.

    Visit Keith's Ramblings!

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  3. kaykualaJuly 13, 2015 at 5:29 PM

    Sometimes they may not realize what they miss. Only when they are lonely will they cry out loud but no one hears! Well written Dee Dee!

    Hank

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    1. DeepaJuly 14, 2015 at 9:55 AM

      true that Kaykuala,they miss the diamond while searching for the stone

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  4. HelenJuly 13, 2015 at 6:32 PM

    A lovely, sad interpretation of Tess' prompt.

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  5. BerowneJuly 13, 2015 at 7:33 PM

    You tell quite a moving story in such a short space; well done.

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  6. JiRaJuly 14, 2015 at 7:51 AM

    Ouch! Sometimes a bluff turns into reality but in the end, sounds like she made the right choice and found out the truth.

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    1. DeepaJuly 14, 2015 at 9:56 AM

      At-least that bluff made her realize that he wasnt for keeps

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  7. AnonymousJuly 16, 2015 at 5:24 AM

    This is so heartbreaking. :(

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  8. DeepaJuly 16, 2015 at 10:26 AM

    Cat-tails I do too :-)

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  9. ArtJuly 16, 2015 at 4:25 PM

    So beautiful Dee Dee...

    Such incidents teach a good lesson in life...

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  10. Boisterous BeeJuly 17, 2015 at 8:40 PM

    This is one heart breaking tale..
    You brought out real well

    Cheers

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  11. Rashmi KarthikJuly 18, 2015 at 8:40 AM

    Awesome and powerful lines Dee Dee:) As usual you rock

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  12. Tess KincaidJuly 19, 2015 at 12:50 AM

    You captured the melancholy perfectly...

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