That other woman, So treacherous
Her cruel intentions were hard to hide
I tried by best to be on guard always
She stole what I love the most
She stole not because she needed, She stole because it was mine, She stole because she was the thief
This post is written for Lillie Mcferrin - FSF: Thief
Did she steal her love?
ReplyDeleteTina from The Sunny Side of Life
Sadly the other woman did, She stole the only man the girl ever loved
DeleteThis is something very different...liked it actually. Well written :)
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Thank you Sushree
Deletepeople like this are scary LOL. love that ending it has a great flair!
ReplyDeleteThey are scary and disguised and back stabbers.
DeleteThanks Mandy
It is heart breaking and this type of women do not deserve love actually.
ReplyDeleteThey don't deserve to live, how cruel is it to steal another woman's man
DeleteShe stole, indeed...
ReplyDeleteShe is the thief
DeleteStealing material things can be pardoned but not hearts. It is mean and cruel. A very different take on the prompt. loved it.
ReplyDeleteStealing anything that is dear to someone else is cruel.
Deletethanks for reading kalpana
She was definitely the thief, but how could he be the steal?
ReplyDeleteHe might be a steal for her n a woman luring another woman's man is stealing
DeleteThis is sad. But the one stolen is also to blame :)
ReplyDeleteTrue that Shail
DeleteLove where you went with the prompt. She definitely took something that didn't belong to her. Very sad. Love the ending too. x
ReplyDeleteThank you Lizzie :-)
Deletelove the way you have woven this one... :-)
ReplyDeleteCheers, Archana - www.drishti.co
Thanks a ton Archana :-)
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