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Thursday, May 19, 2016

FF: Wait

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Her parents never approved her relationship with this womanizing, 15 years older, four times divorced, still married man.

But, for the 20 year old’s rebellious eyes her parents were always wrong & her lover man was right. Her world revolved around him.

One day, they planned to elope to a different city & get married. He asked her to wait at the train station.

She waited and waited for 10 days.

She grew up from a girl to a woman in those 10 days

This post is written for Friday Fictioneers

11 comments:

  1. I think you would grow up... or at least grow accustomed to disillusionment (which I guess is the same as being grown up alas)

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    1. Grow up, maybe become mature or something of that sort?

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    2. Grow up, maybe become mature or something of that sort?

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  2. That's the way it goes. She's learned something.

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    1. She learnt the truth of life. Listen to parents

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  3. The last line was quite brilliant

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  4. Wow! Life to the hilt! I am glad she grew up!

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    1. I am glad too actually, i wonder what would have happened if he would have actuallyturned up

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  5. Looks like her parents were right. I'm sorry for her though, betrayed love is so painful.

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    1. Parents are mostly right with their warnings
      I feel sorry for her too, she was pretty stupid though

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