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Wednesday, May 10, 2017

FF: Jolly Ride

PC: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Randel was not the legal age to drive yet. But, to impress Lisa he took out his Papa's car for a jolly late night drive.

Little did he know, that when Lisa kissed him while he was driving, he would get so overwhelmed that he would lose the control of his car and almost run over the parked bike, and break the passenger side mirror.

Phew! One super first kiss that was.

I wonder what Papa has to say about this jolly ride.

This post is written for Friday Fictioneers

28 comments:

  1. A lot many firsts here. Good writing.

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  2. I reckon it was worth it, whatever Papa thinks!🙂

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    1. I so hope that :P
      Thanks for dropping by Iain :-)

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  3. I suspect Papa will be none too pleased! If it was my son....!

    My FF is called Whoopsie!

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    1. Am sure of that :P
      Thanks for dropping by Keith :-)

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  4. Nothing good. I got into a car wreck as a teen, but alas, it wasn't because of a kiss but another distraction. Dad was less than pleased.

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  5. Kids... I swear they were put on this earth to test our strength!
    Small typo - age to drive...; -)

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    1. hahahaha yes, Dale. Thanks for the correction :-)

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  6. I was thinking about something along those lines too, but hadn't come up with the romantic angle. Instead, I went for the other end of the driving spectrum...the elderly driver.
    xx Rowena

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  7. I also wonder what papa had to say. Nice.

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    1. Nothing nice, am sure :P
      Thanks for dropping by YuHu :-)

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  8. Hopefully all of Randel's kisses are as good as that first one from Lisa (only without the crashing into stuff part!) Fun story (and there's just a little typo in the first sentence).

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    1. I really hope that the crash was well worth it :P
      Thanks for dropping by Michael :-)

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  9. I can imagine what Papa's going to say --- and likely the neighborhood will hear it too. Good take on the prompt.

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    1. Am sure its no going to be nice :P
      Thanks for dropping by SITW

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  10. Cute story. I can definitely see this happening!

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    1. Sascha, I am sure this might have really happened to someone :P

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  11. I, too, wonder what Papa will say.

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  12. If if had been my father in law, he would have laughed and thought of it as proof of his son's manhood.

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    1. Wow, one fine FIL you have :D
      Thanks for dropping by TUJA

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  13. Lucky it wasn't more serious.

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    1. Oh yeah, true that
      Thanks for dropping by Jo :-)

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  14. A great kiss indeed! I bet he thinks the accident was worth it.

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    1. I really hope that it was :P
      Thanks for dropping by Knotts :D

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