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Wednesday, August 23, 2017

FF: For Her

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I am really nervous. I take a deep breath. I want this to be perfect.
She isn't a very showy person. I hope this works out

Phoooo! *deep breath*

I have blindfolded her eyes. I am taking her to this pretty set up I made in our backyard.

I really hope that she likes it.
We are ready. 

I go behind her and take off her blindfold.

She looks awed to see all that pretty set up.

I see tears welled up in her eyes when I say “Happy 60th Birthday Ma”

This post is written for Friday Fictioneers

48 comments:

  1. Ah, what a lovely treat for her Mum! Sweet and touching tale

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  2. Dear Dee Dee,

    What a sweet birthday gift. Lovely.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. A very nice gesture! I'm sure she was delighted.

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    1. Thank you Nick :-)
      I do hope his mum was happy

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  4. Awww.Sweet and thoughtful :)

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  5. There I thought it was for a romantic evening. Nice twist in the end.

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  6. This is so touching and so beautiful. Loved it, DeeDee.

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  7. What a loving way to mark a special birthday!

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  8. The idea of a tent in the backyard is lovely and closer home. Ma must be thrilled on her birthday.this story brought a smile on my face.
    https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/08/discontent.html

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  9. A delightful tale which became all the more so when I arrived at the last line!

    Click to visit Keith's Ramblings

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  10. A simple and elegant take.

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  11. Aww that was a lovely surprise - nicely done :)

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  12. Connie would love such a treat. She's a camping fanatic and just turned sixty in April. Maybe we'll do it for her sixty-first. :) - Russell

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  13. /Wait. Tent camping at 60? I hope there's a cot.

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    1. I do hope that too :P
      Thanks for ropping by Alice :-)

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  14. what a loving gift. she'd remember it for a long time.

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    1. I do hope that she did like it
      Thanks for dropping by Plaridel :-)

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  15. Aw, very sweet thing to do for his mum :-)

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    1. Isn't it :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Alistair

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  16. Moms get touched by anything their child does.
    This b'day surprise is especially touching.

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    1. Always...:-)
      Moms are nice
      Thanks for dropping by Anita

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