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Wednesday, October 4, 2017

FF: Moonlit

PC: Ted Strutz
He was nervous.She was biting her lips. They both were silent for a long time. Both had so much to day but words failed them.
He took her for sailing in his favorite boat,the boat that he named after her.
The moon shone beautifully in the sky, he gathered his guts, put his hand in his pocket nad pulled out the most beautiful antique cut ring.

While the boat and the waters were lit with the moonlight, he went on his knees and asked her “Will you marry me?”

This post is written for Friday Fictioneers

35 comments:

  1. She can't say 'no' after a proposal like that, can she?

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    1. I hope she doesnt :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Iain :-)

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  2. Nice and positive. Good read.

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  3. Aw. Sweet story, Dee Dee.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  4. Aww. What a romantic setting for a proposal :)

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  5. This is the third story based on the prompt to mention proposing marriage. What is it about moonlight, anyway? :D

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    1. Moonlight is romantic......sometimes
      Thanks for dropping by james :-)

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  6. She better say yes. He owns a boat for heavens sakes!

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    1. Quite a valid point to consider :-)
      Thanks for Varad

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  7. I think this is a moment when yes is the best answer.... but who knows.

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    1. Who knows...lets hope for the best though :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Brudberg

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  8. Lovely, DeeDee, very lovely.

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  9. and what a romantic cruise. Hope they will always remain true to each other.

    https://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2017/10/stardust.html

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  10. Awww..... so sweet. I hope she says Yes.

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    1. I do hope that too :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Justjoyfulness

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    1. I hope she does :-)
      Thanks for dropping by Keith

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  12. Aw, so romantic and neat photo ~ ^_^

    A ShutterBug Explores

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  13. Sweet story. But he's already named a boat after her. Is he optimistic or obsessed?

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    1. I hope he is the optimistic one, coz he hasn't shown his obsessive side yet

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  14. What a lovely way to propose! These days I see all these fancy production proposals online, but all you really need to be romantic is an open heart. Although a full moon over the water doesn't hurt!

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  15. I bet she says yes! Very romantic :-)

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  16. i could feel the intensity of the moment the way you wrote it. well done.

    that said, it looks like there's a couple of typos. you can find them in the fourth and sixth sentences.

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