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Paul was lying on the grass with a straw hat on his head and
chewing straw.
His as staring at the sky, and seeing the clouds pass by and
he was trying to calm his head by listening to the crickets and chirping birds.
Every time he opened his eyes, he could only see the girl he
was crushing on, Martha in someone else’s arms.
Slowly, Paul opened his eyes and saw some balloons flying
down his way.
It took only something as small as a balloons
to change the
mood of a 5-year-old Paul and get his head away from his first heartbreak.
Such a sweet story Mrs D!
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Thank you keith :-)
DeleteWell done! Good use of the cue.
ReplyDeleteThank you Paul :-)
DeleteOh, that so touching. Do read mine at https://neelwritesblog.wordpress.com/2017/09/28/neelwritesupndownlikeayoyosixsentencestoriesfiction28092017/
ReplyDeleteThank you Neel :-)
DeleteUP is for optimism! I'm glad a salve for his broken heart came along! Maybe the next young lady won't do him wrong. :-)
ReplyDeleteI do hope that too.
DeleteThanks for the comment Deborah :-)
Very sweet!
ReplyDeleteThank you Kristi :-)
DeleteAww...so sweet! Did not expect Paul to be so young. Poor little guy - heartbreak is terrible at any age.
ReplyDeleteThere is always a first time :-)
DeleteThanks for dropping by Lisa :-)
Sweet story about first heartbreak. The first, but not the last...
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