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Friday, September 11, 2015

FF: Haiku

PHOTO PROMPT – © Jennifer Pendergast
Haiku for the old, who feel lost and abandoned by their family

Eons back, In the sea
I was young, free, wanted by all
Old now, Abandoned by all

This post is written for Friday Fictioneers by Rochelle Wisoff-Feilds
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14 comments:

  1. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsSeptember 11, 2015 at 3:33 PM

    Dear Dee Dee ,

    Cycle of life. Full of sadness.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. DeepaSeptember 12, 2015 at 10:01 PM

      Full of happiness & sadness
      Thanks for dropping by Rochelle :-)

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2015 at 11:33 PM

    Nice Haiku!

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  3. brudbergSeptember 12, 2015 at 1:41 AM

    just like rust
    its holes
    can let sun shine through

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    1. DeepaSeptember 12, 2015 at 10:03 PM

      I agree, but abandoned and alone too
      Thanks for dropping by Brudberg :-)

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  4. Gah LearnerSeptember 12, 2015 at 4:02 AM

    Seventeen words, that must be the record for shortness. Nice take...

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    1. DeepaSeptember 12, 2015 at 10:04 PM

      haiku is limited words, a lot to convey
      Thanks for dropping by Ga H :-)

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  5. Whispering ThoughtsSeptember 13, 2015 at 7:43 AM

    Beautiful poetry for the prompt.

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  6. kalpana solsiSeptember 14, 2015 at 3:30 AM

    It's said all good things in life have to come to an end and and the cycle of rejuvenation continues.

    Expressed a lot in a haiku.http://ideasolsi65.blogspot.in/2015/09/boat.html?m=1

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  7. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2015 at 3:57 PM

    Lovely poem.

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Hey, Your comments would encourage me to write more.
Thanks for dropping in this time.

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